Peer Review
You broke off into groups and read each
other's papers aloud. You then had a discussion about the things you
liked in each narrative. Then you individually read through at least 2
of your classmates papers and made comments and filled out the response
guide. If you checked more than 2 papers you will receive extra credit.
Revisions-Second Drafts
For
homework you need to write a new draft based on your classmates
comments. If none of your classmates offered you any suggestions on how
to make your paper better (which they should've even if it was just
grammatical errors) it is up to you to look through your piece and find
things that you could do better. Maybe you know you rushed the end of
the paper and you want to take another stab at it. Maybe there are some
grammatical errors that you know are there even if your classmates
missed them. There is no such thing as a perfect paper and there is
always something you can improve upon. If you only had the first two
pages of your paper you can work on finishing it. Your second draft is
due Tuesday, October 9 and it should be better than the draft you turned
in today. You will email me this draft before class Tuesday at
micealaya.moses@gmail.com.
Homework
Second Draft of Literacy Narrative (Due Tuesday, Oct. 9) *This is not your final draft*
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